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I know this is a bit old, but I found this only now and I really wanted to leave a comment.

This is definitely my favourite of your stories. It's unique because of how submissive Sakura is. I find that there's not that much foot fetish content where a girl would act as submissive as this. It's also my favourite of your stories because it features a bit more domination than your other works. For example, I liked the part where Sasuke sat on Sakura.

I do feel it's a bit short, though. I've read the comments and I've seen that you feel like your writing would become repetitive with longer stories, but that shouldn't be a problem aslong as you come up with new, creative ideas. You brought it up yourself - you could have added a scene where Sakura applies the massage oil to Sasuke's feet and licks it off or you could have added some different forms of domination such as trampling (my personal favourite part of foot fetish). Though in the end I guess it's up to you to decide what forms of domination you'd want to have in your story.

Again, this was a great story and I really hope to see a part 2.